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(The book is not engaging or complex enough to be written for adults).

The book also features uncomfortable sexual scenes, which I consider inappropriate for a Young Adult novel. And there is no growth and development through time or work the hero just suddenly uses more of her power. For example, Breene, unlike most fantasy authors, does not describe how the hero accesses her magic, how magic is used, etc. The mythology surrounding the Gift (magic) is better developed in this second book than it was in the first, but it is still less developed than in most other books of this genre. Like the first book in this series, "Hunted" is often poorly written (typos, incorrect grammar and syntax, awkwardly worded sentences), but the writing style has improved from the first book ("Chosen").